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I wish I could see your
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022
I wish I could see your photos bigger! The are GORGEOUS!!! It sounds in this poem like you must be on the mend? I hope so. Your line breaks in the first half sound like the breath of someone climbing a steep hill :0) And "here!" at the end, seems...
Read full commentPosted in Climbing up from Minton
You had me from the first
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
You had me from the first sentence. So many details, you really communicated the intensity of his secret life. But there was also a feeling of danger too, how you said this was a release. Also, it was sad about the pants
Read full commentPosted in Jai
Great to have a new
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
Great to have a new installment!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 27
gosh David, thankyou! What a
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
gosh David, thankyou! What a very kind comment :0) I think it is your stories that gave the idea - I wish I could write funny stuff about the news the way Mr Muggins does
Read full commentPosted in two men
You describe all your birds
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2022
You describe all your birds so well, those pigeons, they always seem a bit pompous to me, and your blackbird having a bath with "gusto" is just right :0) And you show again how in tune you are with your crows. I really enjoyed this, all the...
Read full commentPosted in Passing Time
I liked the first poem too,
Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2022
I liked the first poem too, at this time of year when trying to remember what it is like to be warm all through by the sun it was a great reminder of riches. Maybe a Midas reminder. The second one made me think of people thinking they are heroes...
Read full commentPosted in Two Poems Concerning The Sun
I loved this :0) I feel like
Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2022
I loved this :0) I feel like I have been inside your mind, too now, it was so honest. You write with such empathy, understanding for the animal characters living with you. How you describe your dog not having many pees, or barks left, I know that...
Read full commentPosted in Pet Sounds
wow! you have humming birds?!
Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2022
wow! you have humming birds?!?!!! I was enjoying this very much till that bit but now I'm almost too jealous even to say ruby pools is gorgeous way to descrtibe petunias
Read full commentPosted in Shared Existence
I love the idea of thoughtful
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
I love the idea of thoughtful, gentle people being like daisies. Made me think of flowers in unmown grass, shining like acts of kindness, small but adding together into something wonderful
Read full commentPosted in Daisy Chain
I had to read this a few
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2022
I had to read this a few times to get the sense out of it as the sounds are such fun! Lazlo Biro is the most brilliant name :0) And how you have the i/y sounds in the middle of each line from Biro and stylus is so clever. It is very, very...
Read full commentPosted in Inspiration point - scribbled couplet
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