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Is it a school you teach in
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022
Is it a school you teach in? You have so much empathy, are are for sure brilliant at reminding me how much I hated being a pupil :0) The clock ticking your life away took me right back, as well as the noise of scraped chairs. Why is...
hum, well don't lose the sound/tone/rhythm ? i remember you discussing this, maybe at the beginning, and you have really got me, with it, it is like a distinct flavour, that balance of hilarity, tragedy, self pity, self mockery, poetry, daftness...
Really enjoyed this, thankyou :0) You jam in so many interesting things, it is wonderfully rich - sloes, pheasants, rainbows, kites, shadows, wind - every line! A sad last image though. Am glad you are going for walks again, and your...
I liked how everything is alive in your wood, except the human stuff : road and railway. Trees all busy in their cycles with seeds and cones and falling leaves. And your linking of time to another wood, with the white stag, magic messenger or...
enjoyed them??? EEEK! I remember they always had names like Alex or Hilary that could be either he or she, which made it even worse, so when they asked "how many boys did whatever activity, how many girls...?" I would spend the whole...
so much empathy in this! you describe the loss overwhelming like a stormy sea very clearly, the endless cold, nothing to hold onto, everything strange and no one can help
This brave poem speaks of strength and belief in the possibility of a better future, and is Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please share and retweet if you can
I found the exchanging of one soul for another very interesting, not a completely happy ending, but more likely, and wonder if the unlucky farmer was one of the Williams' ancestors? If you did do a sequel, I hope you fill in his character and...
Is it a school you teach in
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022
Is it a school you teach in? You have so much empathy, are are for sure brilliant at reminding me how much I hated being a pupil :0) The clock ticking your life away took me right back, as well as the noise of scraped chairs. Why is...
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part One of Two)
hum, well don't lose the
Posted on Mon, 17 Oct 2022
hum, well don't lose the sound/tone/rhythm ? i remember you discussing this, maybe at the beginning, and you have really got me, with it, it is like a distinct flavour, that balance of hilarity, tragedy, self pity, self mockery, poetry, daftness...
Read full commentPosted in Ugly Puggly 92
You will have given some of
Posted on Wed, 19 Oct 2022
You will have given some of the foundation for that! You must be very good at support work, I think
Read full commentPosted in Railway - a true memory poem
Gosh Jenny, this is almost
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
Gosh Jenny, this is almost scarily intense! Music as Life Force?
Read full commentPosted in Interesting Times
Really enjoyed this, thankyou
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
Really enjoyed this, thankyou :0) You jam in so many interesting things, it is wonderfully rich - sloes, pheasants, rainbows, kites, shadows, wind - every line! A sad last image though. Am glad you are going for walks again, and your...
Read full commentPosted in Above Old Downton Lodge
I liked how everything is
Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022
I liked how everything is alive in your wood, except the human stuff : road and railway. Trees all busy in their cycles with seeds and cones and falling leaves. And your linking of time to another wood, with the white stag, magic messenger or...
Read full commentPosted in Hunsbury Hill Country Park
enjoyed them??? EEEK! I
Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2022
enjoyed them??? EEEK! I remember they always had names like Alex or Hilary that could be either he or she, which made it even worse, so when they asked "how many boys did whatever activity, how many girls...?" I would spend the whole...
Read full commentPosted in Fish Finger Maths!
so much empathy in this! you
Posted on Wed, 12 Oct 2022
so much empathy in this! you describe the loss overwhelming like a stormy sea very clearly, the endless cold, nothing to hold onto, everything strange and no one can help
Read full commentPosted in Only The Lonely
This brave poem speaks of
Posted on Wed, 12 Oct 2022
This brave poem speaks of strength and belief in the possibility of a better future, and is Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please share and retweet if you can
Read full commentPosted in Mallow Pink
I found the exchanging of one
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
I found the exchanging of one soul for another very interesting, not a completely happy ending, but more likely, and wonder if the unlucky farmer was one of the Williams' ancestors? If you did do a sequel, I hope you fill in his character and...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)
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