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Like Insert, I feel this
Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021
Like Insert, I feel this needs lots of thinking about.
At the moment, it makes me think that a mother's words (or maybe, reading again, anyone in authority's words) can be a fence that at first we are happy for as it gives the huge world...
Gosh Luigi, you have conjured up a feeling of passion with these short lines! Although have often heard of leaves dancing, this is brilliant, different, you have given Autumn a new dimension for me, thankyou!
I liked this so much! Finding empty shelves in the supermarket each day is only a tiny bit how it must be for creatures in the wild as the food web disintigrates under the weight of our stupidity and selfishness. I tend to rant, but you have...
That's special Rhiannon, thankyou for being so wonderful :0) The rhythm is perfect, quick as the flickering light and the whole brings such a feeling of everything being right in the world. Brilliant. Can only echo what Luigi says!
Your Cicely must have had a very strong spirit to keep going when her parents passed, though I wonder, if grief is like a tide that's high when you first lose someone, then ebbs as you come to terms with it in order to keep going, then as you...
Like Insert, I feel this
Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021
Like Insert, I feel this needs lots of thinking about.
At the moment, it makes me think that a mother's words (or maybe, reading again, anyone in authority's words) can be a fence that at first we are happy for as it gives the huge world...
Read full commentPosted in To Begin at the Beginning
Gosh Luigi, you have conjured
Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021
Gosh Luigi, you have conjured up a feeling of passion with these short lines! Although have often heard of leaves dancing, this is brilliant, different, you have given Autumn a new dimension for me, thankyou!
Read full commentPosted in Autumn Leaves
I liked this so much! Finding
Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021
I liked this so much! Finding empty shelves in the supermarket each day is only a tiny bit how it must be for creatures in the wild as the food web disintigrates under the weight of our stupidity and selfishness. I tend to rant, but you have...
Read full commentPosted in Out in the Fields
That's special Rhiannon,
Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021
That's special Rhiannon, thankyou for being so wonderful :0) The rhythm is perfect, quick as the flickering light and the whole brings such a feeling of everything being right in the world. Brilliant. Can only echo what Luigi says!
Read full commentPosted in The Wind in the Willows
I am so sorry to hear that.
Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021
I am so sorry to hear that. It must be terrible for you. I am glad you felt good today and were able to write this poem
Read full commentPosted in I understand the wild beast’s roars. (IP) (Nat.geo.wild)
Your Cicely must have had a
Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021
Your Cicely must have had a very strong spirit to keep going when her parents passed, though I wonder, if grief is like a tide that's high when you first lose someone, then ebbs as you come to terms with it in order to keep going, then as you...
Read full commentPosted in Beneath An Autumn Moon The Poem
I found this powerful and
Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021
I found this powerful and moving, this extreme distress seems very real, I hope you are ok
Read full commentPosted in I understand the wild beast’s roars. (IP) (Nat.geo.wild)
Wow! That must be the perfect
Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021
Wow! That must be the perfect short story! Was absolutely not expecting the ending:0)
Read full commentPosted in Travels with my Aunt
I really like how you mix
Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021
I really like how you mix homely into Hallow -
"farmers gathering crops late into the night,"
"School halls bursting with the fruits of Harvest,"
and the creatures outside, in the wild -
"a bee’s buzz slows as dreams...
Read full commentPosted in Autumn
Had a feeling it would be him
Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021
Had a feeling it would be him at the door :0) How do you create your characters? You are brilliant! Do you have any tips?
Perfidia is becoming more and more interesting, I am so impressed how you are exposing a bit more of her...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 16
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