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I have 179 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 610482 times and 283 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1948 of my 5,915 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2006 votes

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Like Insert, I feel this

Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021

Like Insert, I feel this needs lots of thinking about.

At the moment, it makes me think that a mother's words (or maybe, reading again, anyone in authority's words) can be a fence that at first we are happy for as it gives the huge world...

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Posted in To Begin at the Beginning

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Gosh Luigi, you have conjured

Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021

Gosh Luigi, you have conjured up a feeling of passion with these short lines! Although have often heard of leaves dancing, this is brilliant, different, you have given Autumn a new dimension for me, thankyou!

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Posted in Autumn Leaves

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I liked this so much! Finding

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

I liked this so much! Finding empty shelves in the supermarket each day is only a tiny bit how it must be for creatures in the wild as the food web disintigrates under the weight of our stupidity and selfishness. I tend to rant, but you have...

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Posted in Out in the Fields

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That's special Rhiannon,

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

That's special Rhiannon, thankyou for being so wonderful :0) The rhythm is perfect, quick as the flickering light and the whole brings such a feeling of everything being right in the world. Brilliant. Can only echo what Luigi says!

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Posted in The Wind in the Willows

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I am so sorry to hear that.

Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021

I am so sorry to hear that. It must be terrible for you. I am glad you felt good today and were able to write this poem

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Posted in I understand the wild beast’s roars. (IP) (Nat.geo.wild)

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Your Cicely must have had a

Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021

Your Cicely must have had a very strong spirit to keep going when her parents passed, though I wonder, if grief is like a tide that's high when you first lose someone, then ebbs as you come to terms with it in order to keep going, then as you...

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Posted in Beneath An Autumn Moon The Poem

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I found this powerful and

Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021

I found this powerful and moving, this extreme distress seems very real, I hope you are ok

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Posted in I understand the wild beast’s roars. (IP) (Nat.geo.wild)

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Wow! That must be the perfect

Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021

Wow! That must be the perfect short story! Was absolutely not expecting the ending:0)

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Posted in Travels with my Aunt

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I really like how you mix

Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021

I really like how you mix homely into Hallow -

"farmers gathering crops late into the night,"

"School halls bursting with the fruits of Harvest,"

and the creatures outside, in the wild -

"a bee’s buzz slows as dreams...

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Posted in Autumn

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Had a feeling it would be him

Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021

Had a feeling it would be him at the door :0) How do you create your characters? You are brilliant! Do you have any tips? 

Perfidia is becoming more and more interesting, I am so impressed how you are exposing a bit more of her...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 16

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