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Didn't find it melancholic,
Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2022
Didn't find it melancholic, but that made it the more scary. Hypnotic, yes. But mostly seductive, the rhythm. It reminded me of the delicate ferociousness of a spider's hunger, the gentleness of it wrapping its prey as your words wrap the reader...
I really liked the bit about what the magazine was called :0) Stil intrigued to know what role the dog plays in the plot and looking forward to part 3!
That's a great idea, to take Dorian Gray and use it to make a painting hold happiness while life life has only unhappiness. Sort of like a drug, do you think? Am still trying to work out the significance of Miss Haversham
Enjoyed thi so much. As someone who doesn't travel, I love it when reading can whisk me away in a few lines, and you do, I feel I know the smells, the resting day, the contented expectation of more discovery tomorrow
I had missed it, too, and it is wonderful, I love the idea that even when parting kindred spirits are united by the same light, both within from what "delights" and makes shared laughter, and from without, by the sun. And that you have "au revoir...
The way you have your rhymes really sounds like the puff and grrr of struggle, and completed, unrhymed at the end made me think of movement ended, a flat stone to sit on at the top :0)
Church and Monastery bells were a big part of Western soundscapes in earlier times, weren't they? And the Muezzzin is still important? It is interesting how as sounds and reminders of religion/ God fade so sounds of how we remade the world grow...
You are so good at conveying how you feel, your love for the Natural world, with your gentle, rich flowing words. I understood exactly how you felt, inside the stiffness of glass windows, imagining the infinite shifting of fragile leaves, far...
Didn't find it melancholic,
Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2022
Didn't find it melancholic, but that made it the more scary. Hypnotic, yes. But mostly seductive, the rhythm. It reminded me of the delicate ferociousness of a spider's hunger, the gentleness of it wrapping its prey as your words wrap the reader...
Read full commentPosted in Ceiba (Silk-Cotton Tree)
I really liked the bit about
Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2022
I really liked the bit about what the magazine was called :0) Stil intrigued to know what role the dog plays in the plot and looking forward to part 3!
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy" 2
I notice Sir Harry is not so
Posted on Sat, 23 Jul 2022
I notice Sir Harry is not so subtle as Willow :0) Am interested to find out if he keeps influencing the plot!
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy"
Penny, thankyou for reading
Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022
Penny, thankyou for reading and commenting. And for writing a new story! I saw you had posted it and am saving it to read, like a biscuit :0)
I listen to programs about climate change, politics, economics. Just like the sea, there seems to...
Read full commentPosted in sound escape
That's a great idea, to take
Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2022
That's a great idea, to take Dorian Gray and use it to make a painting hold happiness while life life has only unhappiness. Sort of like a drug, do you think? Am still trying to work out the significance of Miss Haversham
I loved the...
Read full commentPosted in The Artist of Swanage Downs
Enjoyed thi so much. As
Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022
Enjoyed thi so much. As someone who doesn't travel, I love it when reading can whisk me away in a few lines, and you do, I feel I know the smells, the resting day, the contented expectation of more discovery tomorrow
Read full commentPosted in Bed and Board by The Silk Road
I had missed it, too, and it
Posted on Fri, 03 Jun 2022
I had missed it, too, and it is wonderful, I love the idea that even when parting kindred spirits are united by the same light, both within from what "delights" and makes shared laughter, and from without, by the sun. And that you have "au revoir...
Read full commentPosted in Nuages
The way you have your rhymes
Posted on Tue, 19 Jul 2022
The way you have your rhymes really sounds like the puff and grrr of struggle, and completed, unrhymed at the end made me think of movement ended, a flat stone to sit on at the top :0)
Read full commentPosted in Any Hard Task
Church and Monastery bells
Posted on Tue, 19 Jul 2022
Church and Monastery bells were a big part of Western soundscapes in earlier times, weren't they? And the Muezzzin is still important? It is interesting how as sounds and reminders of religion/ God fade so sounds of how we remade the world grow...
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Noises : A Futurist's Manifesto
You are so good at conveying
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2022
You are so good at conveying how you feel, your love for the Natural world, with your gentle, rich flowing words. I understood exactly how you felt, inside the stiffness of glass windows, imagining the infinite shifting of fragile leaves, far...
Read full commentPosted in Silver Birch
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