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I have 179 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
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"what still belongs to me?"

Posted on Fri, 15 Oct 2021

"what still belongs to me?" Having a small w makes me think of how insignificant her voice is, small, inside her, with the whole whirling condemnation and disbelief and uncaringness of the world spread out around, for as far as she could possibly...

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Posted in Esther Cox

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I like the elementals in this

Posted on Sun, 10 Oct 2021

I like the elementals in this so much, and had not heard of the baby on a swan's wing, so looked it up. So, thankyou for that too!

Reddled made me think of a mixture of red and riddled?

Perfect argument against cryonics 

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Posted in My Body Belongs to the Earth

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I love cooking, too, which is

Posted on Tue, 12 Oct 2021

I love cooking, too, which is partly why I like this,  how sensuous you show it to be. But also how you use this to show , I don't know - cultures? people? can grow/blend, become something new and just as good,( maybe better, for leaving some...

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Posted in Ostrich eggs and elephant milk

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Just re read this, and wanted

Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021

Just re read this, and wanted to say how beautiful it is. Gentle. Wise. I love it

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Posted in Going With The Flow

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I wonder if it is like the

Posted on Fri, 08 Oct 2021

I wonder if it is like the difference between a solo singer's voice and a choir? Both are beautiful and powerful. I loved your description in the first part

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Posted in October

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I had always thought it was

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

I had always thought it was to make sure we stay right where they want us? 

I think cats need suspense - If a cat sits next to a likely looking hole is a mouse going to come out of that hole? If a cat lies down suddenly in the middle of...

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Posted in More About Cats

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Agree with Jenny! Specially

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

Agree with Jenny! Specially the beginning. Just the rhythm of this :

"India was snoozing peacefully in her crate, warmed by a handy shaft of autumnal sunshine shining through the kitchen window.  She heard, but tried to ignore, the pad,...

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Posted in From A Dithtanthe!

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Brilliant Luigi!!!  

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

Brilliant Luigi!!!

 

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Posted in Choice

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You are a brilliant poet, can

Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021

You are a brilliant poet, can pin down the mist of moods, almost in a sort of collage of trivial things to make something so intimate.

 I wish you a happy day tomorrow.

I hope this is not insensitive and ignorant, if you find sugary...

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Posted in When I'm sad I eat sweets

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Oh Penny, this is great! I so

Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021

Oh Penny, this is great! I so hope you can keep spinning your story for many many more episodes. The panda details were lovely :0) And the tiny snippets of the person behind all these challenges, and Max, you are revealing them just the right...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 19

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