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I found this intriguing too,
Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2022
I found this intriguing too, as not sure whether the unexplored was internal or external, about habit and new experiences or how we don't understand what we think we know about Nature, about how writing ideas can spread like cities
If all you need to try a publisher is someone to check for typos, I'd be happy to have a go? I'd be bound to miss a few, but if it would help? I don't like to go on about them every time I see them incase it's discouraging
This dialogue is sparkling, not a single un needed word, it's really fun to read. Thankyou so much for keeping going, it has been wonderful to see your story unfold, the strong characters and place. That the relationship wrong-turns of...
So sorry to hear you are not well. But you make me think you are strong and irrepressable as a wildflower unfurling new petals even when it's been walked on, to make lovely poems when you are feeling low
I found this intriguing too,
Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2022
I found this intriguing too, as not sure whether the unexplored was internal or external, about habit and new experiences or how we don't understand what we think we know about Nature, about how writing ideas can spread like cities
Read full commentPosted in From Out of the Bush
"They were all dead and
Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2022
That bit stood out for me, too, "They were all dead and belonged not to us, but each other" that's so true, that's just how it feels in churchyards
The may or may not be ghost is a great addition, unbalancing Jim who is usually the most...
Read full commentPosted in Ugly Puggly 43
If all you need to try a
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
If all you need to try a publisher is someone to check for typos, I'd be happy to have a go? I'd be bound to miss a few, but if it would help? I don't like to go on about them every time I see them incase it's discouraging
If you...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)
This dialogue is sparkling,
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
This dialogue is sparkling, not a single un needed word, it's really fun to read. Thankyou so much for keeping going, it has been wonderful to see your story unfold, the strong characters and place. That the relationship wrong-turns of...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)
I really enjoyed this. I
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
I really enjoyed this. I remembered a poem about Spencer (I like seagulls) We have looked after baby seagulls too in the past, none this year yet.
I liked this not just for the accurate accounts of seagulls' pooing proficiency, but also...
Read full commentPosted in Freddie
The image of a little girl
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
The image of a little girl with the bees coming down to her is magical. And that she is Queen, in a world inside a world.
And you "holding court" yet she is Queen, and gives you honey and thegift of friendship sweet beyond words
Read full commentPosted in (This Life) Part 6: The Bee Keeper’s Daughter
As CM said, this made me
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
As CM said, this made me think how in future they would want volunteers for euthanasia, that seemed horribly likely.
The meteor shower could have been a satelite fleet being blown up?
I wonder how much of the sense of fatigue you...
Read full commentPosted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)
So sorry to hear you are not
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
So sorry to hear you are not well. But you make me think you are strong and irrepressable as a wildflower unfurling new petals even when it's been walked on, to make lovely poems when you are feeling low
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Violet
Enjoyed would be the wrong
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
Enjoyed would be the wrong word, but I thought this was a great part 2. Impossible to think of horses in such a Britain, as it is mammoths now.
The only thing is, why would there only be black and white movies on tv? There would be huge...
Read full commentPosted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)
you certainly have his
Posted on Fri, 17 Jun 2022
you certainly have his chanting rhythm!
I particularly liked :
As I stared into my crystal tumbler,
cut-glass embalmed with amber,
had not thought of liquid as being like that for glasses, great image :0)
Read full commentPosted in The Raven Returned
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