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I have 180 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 891149 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2209 of my 6,238 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2296 votes

2209 of my comments have received 2296 Great Feedback votes

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I was a bit confused about

Posted on Mon, 13 Jun 2022

I was a bit confused about the photo to start with, but of course, the greenness of grass would be more important to grazing animals than anyone else!

I wonder why green is the colour of envy? Your second part immediately made me think of...

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Posted in Unfair (?)

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Aaaargh only one more part???

Posted on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

Aaaargh only one more part???

Please do a sequel :0) I cannot rememberr if I asked you this already, but, did you know from the beginning who it was?

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 31 ( Conclusions Part 1 of 2)

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I found it interesting to

Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022

I found it interesting to read this exploration of remembering those who have passed. I live far from where my Dad is, and though there for his funeral have not seen his gravestone. But lately, I keep dreaming of him. Before he got really bad...

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This is like watching a

Posted on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

This is like watching a clever person spinning lots of plates! How on Earth do you keep all this so up in the air and intriguing? Just when I thought Miriam was horrid, now I sympathise with her :0) And I had ruled Jon out, but...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 30 ( narrowing down the suspects)

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There's a wonderful coolness

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

There's a wonderful coolness to them,isn't there? Your last line, about them being a work of art, made me think of pictures I have seen of the inside of the Blue Mosque?

This poem is a lovely Summer companion to your one about Hyacinths :0...

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Posted in Love In The Mist

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This is scary! I think

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

This is scary! I think because some parts are so closely my experience (almost dying), but mixed in with sinister and truly frightening thoughts, I was so worried about the baby boy. I wonder if you carry it further, if he will believe in his...

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Posted in Largo and Seraphine

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Great episode! You made it

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

Great episode! You made it easy to identify with Maben all through

Isn't pus a sign of infection? Could you say "ooze?"

I guess a child who is always hungry becomes used to hunting out anything edible, that she was so desperate...

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Posted in The Castle (16)

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I'm so glad you didn't rest

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

I'm so glad you didn't rest with the photo! That could only be static, and your poem catches the movement of crop striving and tree slowly easing back into the land's food chain. Your title could even be about the life stage of the tree? And at a...

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Posted in Evening peace

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Perfidia is a wonderful

Posted on Fri, 03 Jun 2022

Perfidia is a wonderful character :0) I love how you play with her belief in her sense of superiority when she meets Dillon :

"“More than once actually, if I’m forced to be honest and I think for the moment I am,” he admitted with...

Di_Hard

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2209 of my comments have received 2296 Great Feedback votes

I was a bit confused about

Aaaargh only one more part???

I found it interesting to

This is like watching a

There's a wonderful coolness

This is scary! I think

Great episode! You made it

I'm so glad you didn't rest

Perfidia is a wonderful

I love the idea of Faith

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