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We all go to the woods for
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
We all go to the woods for privacy, but want privacy for different reasons. Am often picking up aftershave cans which I think children here must sniff. Never nitrous oxide, though. I hope they don't think I am a witch.
You do sound like you are much better! I really admired and enjoyed your determined persevering :0) What an awful lot of obstacles! I hope you will make an account of it for your grandchildren :0)
I really liked your descriptions of school The English teacher always looking about to hold up a salmon is great :0) And the boys' conversations are so believable. and tying 1984 to a mystery and unease of a different kind, Danny's question,...
Yes. It seems to me, if it is like a sum which cancels down and down eventually it cannot work out, for if every worker is being paid the minimum, or loses their job owing to efficiencies in production, then who is left to buy what is made?...
I agree with Alfred about wishing is was easier to talk to a human when there is a problem. I don't know how having even fewer people working on trains, for example, is meant to increase profits as no one buys tickets if there is no ticket...
We all go to the woods for
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
We all go to the woods for privacy, but want privacy for different reasons. Am often picking up aftershave cans which I think children here must sniff. Never nitrous oxide, though. I hope they don't think I am a witch.
Your teacher having...
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)
You do sound like you are
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
You do sound like you are much better! I really admired and enjoyed your determined persevering :0) What an awful lot of obstacles! I hope you will make an account of it for your grandchildren :0)
Read full commentPosted in Going on a Way-hunt!
I really liked your
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
I really liked your descriptions of school The English teacher always looking about to hold up a salmon is great :0) And the boys' conversations are so believable. and tying 1984 to a mystery and unease of a different kind, Danny's question,...
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)
lots and lots and lots of
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
lots and lots and lots of luck Jean. Your last line, you sound like an explorer going somewhere marked "Here be dragons" I do so hope it all goes well
Read full commentPosted in Chemo
agree with Insert, this
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
agree with Insert, this reminds me so much of when I used to walk at dawn, the feeling of being the only person and surrounded by glory
Read full commentPosted in Goldenrod and Wild Aster
That's wonderful Jenny!
Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022
That's wonderful Jenny!
I loved :
hushed efficiency,
and
among husks/ rising; glint of golden/ welcome,
and
so slight she can/ balance on heads of/ wheat
you really do evoke the idea of...
Read full commentPosted in Harvest Mouse
Yes. It seems to me, if it is
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
Yes. It seems to me, if it is like a sum which cancels down and down eventually it cannot work out, for if every worker is being paid the minimum, or loses their job owing to efficiencies in production, then who is left to buy what is made?...
Read full commentPosted in rage, rage against the Dying of your Rights
I agree with Alfred about
Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022
I agree with Alfred about wishing is was easier to talk to a human when there is a problem. I don't know how having even fewer people working on trains, for example, is meant to increase profits as no one buys tickets if there is no ticket...
Read full commentPosted in Turkish Hotels : Socialist Paradise? By Alfred N.Muggins
I felt tenser reading this!
Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022
I felt tenser reading this! you make spittle seem empirical evidence
Read full commentPosted in Being Galileo
How on earth (!) to you gat
Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022
How on earth (!) to you gat such a sense of space in so few words? I loved this
Read full commentPosted in Mid-Wales Haiku?
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