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I have 179 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 610669 times and 283 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1949 of my 5,915 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2007 votes

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1949 of my comments have received 2007 Great Feedback votes

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Had a feeling it would be him

Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021

Had a feeling it would be him at the door :0) How do you create your characters? You are brilliant! Do you have any tips? 

Perfidia is becoming more and more interesting, I am so impressed how you are exposing a bit more of her...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 16

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Wow! This is my favourite

Posted on Sun, 12 Sep 2021

Wow! This is my favourite episode yet!  I LOVED  the beginning, with the delivery man and then it went on to be so action packed. Good on Willow! You have been building up this fete for ages and it has started off brilliantly!

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 17

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trouble, gullible, rebel are

Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2021

trouble, gullible, rebel are great!

This reminded me of that brilliant one of yours about homelessness?

"imaginatively disobey" this reminded me of some bright children, who put so much effort into not doing things. How wonderful to...

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Posted in A Winning Handshake

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I liked "clouds squeezed to a

Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021

I liked "clouds squeezed to a pulp" too, made me think of them being like fruit making juicy rain :0)

Also "lightening strikes like a knife" is wonderful, both for the quick jabbing sounds and the imagery

And the idea of leaves...

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Posted in Yin And Yang Of Autumn Forest

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"Once, men and trees knew the

Posted on Sun, 05 Sep 2021

"Once, men and trees knew the same earth," would have taken me a whole poem to say this :0)

I liked the fairy tale too. I suppose for many people in the past, and now, in some places, stories were the only place where justice...

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Posted in The Swallow's Broken Leg

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involving description of the

Posted on Sat, 04 Sep 2021

brilliantly involving description of the approach of an exhilarating but uncontrollable force. I hope you are keeping safe!

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Posted in The Smell

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I LOVE this poem,Jenny. How

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

I LOVE this poem,Jenny. How far you travel - from beside a cobweb, like a symbol of stillness and fragility, to a distant hill where "copse of strong trees stand" ( I love that you put strong in there, too) All brought about by you listening to...

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Posted in Trees Called To Me

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You are clever at making the

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

You are clever at making the reader feel your story is true! not the ones about the  pm obv. :0)

should it be storey? "Story after wooden story took the construction to new heights. "

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Posted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

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"the coach now sways to

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

"the coach now sways to

"the sweep of an October wind"  so  sinuous !

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Posted in Riding The Rails

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"She smiles (thinly) spins

Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021

"She smiles (thinly) spins and twirls," seems sad? Is it because she is trapped doing the same dance over and over, like a doorkeeper into magic, so though she seems fragile is powerful. But longs to have wings be in the place she guards? 

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Posted in Ballerina Toy Box

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