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Didn't know that about
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
Didn't know that about cabbages! very interesting :0) Learn more from your wonderful poems than biology at school. You are an amassador for Nature!
There was an interesting program about smell the other day? Apparently people adapt better...
this is wonderful! It really does remind me of dawn, it's magic. The way you keep saying roll, but it doesn't, it is movement, a wheel waiting all the way to the last line, when suddenly it frees up with "butterfly and bee". Made me think of dew...
You make writing into an adventure :0) I liked the idea of the fork in the road - which word to choose, how will the choice change where the writing goes? Also "lying in wait for thoughts" loved this idea
You evoke a feeling of danger in the first part, both coming from outside (someone deceiving you) and inside, with the striking image of your dreams for the relationship being like steps sinking into honey. And then comes the warmth and...
your photo is so beautiful! Is that a picture of a blanket your Mother made? It is a lovely idea to give all those close to you something full of your time and love, special for each person.
Didn't know that about
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
Didn't know that about cabbages! very interesting :0) Learn more from your wonderful poems than biology at school. You are an amassador for Nature!
There was an interesting program about smell the other day? Apparently people adapt better...
Read full commentPosted in Electric Bees
this made me laugh, thankyou
Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020
this made me laugh, thankyou :0)
It got to be such a lucrative sideline that even fat people who had never shot a game of pool in their life would turn up on these chat shows.
"That body you see in the movie," they would...
Read full commentPosted in Minnesota Fats
this is moving and powerful:
Posted on Thu, 30 Jul 2020
this is moving and powerful:
a tiger has been unstealthed -
this is not the consequence
of a triumph of secrecy: fire has been here,
thieves, and now she is a ghost
of the only autumn these trees...
Read full commentPosted in South China Tiger
this is wonderful! It really
Posted on Thu, 30 Jul 2020
this is wonderful! It really does remind me of dawn, it's magic. The way you keep saying roll, but it doesn't, it is movement, a wheel waiting all the way to the last line, when suddenly it frees up with "butterfly and bee". Made me think of dew...
Read full commentPosted in dawn to day
Enjoyed this very much,
Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2020
Enjoyed this very much, thankyou!
Read full commentPosted in I Am a Mountain
You make writing into an
Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2020
You make writing into an adventure :0) I liked the idea of the fork in the road - which word to choose, how will the choice change where the writing goes? Also "lying in wait for thoughts" loved this idea
Read full commentPosted in Words Of Comfort
You evoke a feeling of
Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020
You evoke a feeling of danger in the first part, both coming from outside (someone deceiving you) and inside, with the striking image of your dreams for the relationship being like steps sinking into honey. And then comes the warmth and...
Read full commentPosted in Hope
your photo is so beautiful!
Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020
your photo is so beautiful! Is that a picture of a blanket your Mother made? It is a lovely idea to give all those close to you something full of your time and love, special for each person.
I like how you repeat words like yarn and row,...
Read full commentPosted in "Anna's Blanket"
Another of your lovely bird
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020
Another of your lovely bird poems! I specially like :
a spirit of young
sparrows
proudly feathered.
Read full commentPosted in Here Birdie
This was a lovely, comforting
Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2020
This was a lovely, comforting read, I really like : "It is beauty; it is alive. It stands tall and proud and timeless…and breathes life for us."
Did you go to the ones they have on nature programmes, so huge it takes a dozen steps to walk...
Read full commentPosted in Under the Redwoods...
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