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What a great poem! The voice
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
What a great poem! The voice felt like that of a child, to me, the end was a cry, the last lines particularly like a pause, looking around and thinking, after all the short lines like steps darting and dodging through a crowd. As Stephen says...
Read full commentPosted in No Ties (IP)
Ooooooooh! You've kept this
Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021
Ooooooooh! You've kept this going for ages and it's still so good! I liked the detail of Perfidia's magenta fingernail :0)
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 12
"stillness of view lies
Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021
"stillness of view lies undemanding," I love this, also
"stirring breathless boundaries
of Castle's history;
sleeping ditches once beat rapidly,"
How you so brilliantly dive through the present into the past, making...
Read full commentPosted in Timeless Wonder
your forest is so much more
Posted on Tue, 22 Jun 2021
your forest is so much more than the small woods I walk in, wonderful wild atmosphere you create here
Read full commentPosted in Diaspora
You are so good at evoking
Posted on Mon, 21 Jun 2021
You are so good at evoking the feelings of wonder that these days must have had! I remember your Spring one and this is a great addition :0) Thank you for bringing magic
Read full commentPosted in Estival Solstice
It is strange how we can hold
Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021
It is strange how we can hold time inside, and you will be in all your family's best memories, too, all knitted together by times you have shared? Congratulations on 37 years :0)
Read full commentPosted in "Photographs & Reflections"
Wonderful! I hadn't realised
Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021
Wonderful! I hadn't realised you had posted another one, so glad it's story of the week - much deserved!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 11
How many times and places
Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2021
How many times and places have seen this horrible looking for a scapegoat, a sacrifice. Your translation flowed well, to me, the idea of the helpless and the accusing both becoming sand again, to mix on the shore
Read full commentPosted in The contagion that killed the fisherman's wife
I like the contrast of
Posted on Tue, 15 Jun 2021
I like the contrast of "shards of light" with "softly rustles" also "gathers in bundles" is just right for cherries. You have done your cherry tree proud :0)
Read full commentPosted in Cherry Tree
So glad to see you have
Posted on Tue, 15 Jun 2021
So glad to see you have escaped the house to write this detailed account, I feel I have been there. It sounds wonderful with all the flowers, and I liked the foxglove sentinel, you pick up everything important. I do hope your health continues to...
Read full commentPosted in Finding the Castle in the village of Richard's Castle.
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