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As I iron so
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020
As I iron so rarely it is very stressful and concentrated so not sure if your poem is an accurate reflection on normal ironing. However it is BRILLIANT description of washing machine noise, I love how it goes round and round like my thoughts...
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I like having moth in mothers
Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2020
I like having moth in mothers, so the tree is part moth, that's clever
and "moon-felted" like the moon feels them as well as being soft as felt
and "ink of feathers" because it is so fragile
and I had bever heard "instar" so...
Read full commentPosted in Puss Moths
I like this exchange very
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020
I like this exchange very much! Abigail is getting much more self confident, too. Cleaning wounds and cooking supper. That she is worried about Buck because he is old reinforces that she is little, just having to grow up very fast. "All quick" I...
Read full commentPosted in Pins (6)
Posted on Mon, 29 Jun 2020
Uncomfortaby is my typo!!!!! Couldn't get the cut and paste bit to work. So sorry to send you looking.
You must be boggling predictive text with this wonderful language! I imagine a fuse going somewhere with stuff like "felt his...
Read full commentPosted in Pins (3)
I had no idea maggots were
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020
I had no idea maggots were called gentles, that is so horrid!!! I like your idea very much of flies being funeral directors too, and their "efficient fervour" even sounds buzzy/busy
Read full commentPosted in Bluebottle
Enjoyed this very much! I had
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2020
Enjoyed this very much! I had never thought of water "slouching"! Particularly liked "the stream is a gurgle" and "one more slurp" which create idea of movement and soiund. You have created a character out of this stream, it's great!
Read full commentPosted in Anxious Moments
Had to read this several
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2020
Had to read this several times as so admiring of your wordplay was missing the meaning :0) The other night there was a program about co-writer of musical Alexander Hamilton, which reminded me of how you write, it is a rare and wonderfful gift to...
Read full commentPosted in Breakout!
Abundance is right! I love
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2020
Abundance is right! I love cats' ears too :0) Do you need to dig it up to make a meadow? It looks like you have a wonderful variety of species right now! Maybe could try plug plants of things like scabious as they can be a bit tricky from seed (...
Read full commentPosted in Unmown ‘lawns’ – plant conglomeration
This is gorgeous! I don't
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020
This is gorgeous! I don't know how you make a few lines so full of space and light and freshness! I love "escape and rise" and "swells ripple", and the cosiness of "home" at the end, like a welcoming door. And you caught some beautiful wind in...
Read full commentPosted in Dream with the breeze
reminded me of being jealous
Posted on Sat, 30 May 2020
reminded me of being jealous of someone when i first started school and the teacher said she was away with the fairies. i was always checking to see if she sparkled, but she was always sad. it is a good way of finding people like me, if they are...
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