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Haha! Brilliant way to end it
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
Haha! Brilliant way to end it! I hope there's more to come?
I never heard that about magpies holding funerals before - how interesting! The house I lived n before this one was on the edge of woodland and there were so many magpies - beautiful and clever birds, though I never could feel quite the same way...
Big congratulations Rhiannon - I loved this and am very glad it has been given some golden cherries which it well deserves- there's something timeless and comforting about both the poem and the lamplight
If you're looking for suggestions, I'd say perhaps an edit of the description in the first two thirds of this part. It's good scene setting, but verging on too much
Haha! Brilliant way to end it
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
Haha! Brilliant way to end it! I hope there's more to come?
Read full commentPosted in "Unwanted Magic" 1
I never heard that about
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
I never heard that about magpies holding funerals before - how interesting! The house I lived n before this one was on the edge of woodland and there were so many magpies - beautiful and clever birds, though I never could feel quite the same way...
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What a perfect ending - well
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
What a perfect ending - well done!
Read full commentPosted in Wasn't that a party
Congratulations on the golden
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
Congratulations on the golden cherries!
Read full commentPosted in Enoshima (Part One of Two)
I'm enjoying it too - there's
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
I'm enjoying it too - there's a knack to travel writing and you have most definitely (and luckily for us) got it. Thank you Turlough!
Read full commentPosted in Only Here for The Poets
oh! now that will be a very
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
oh! now that will be a very interesting meeting! The dating scammer and Spencer.
I also like the way in which you've inserted the standard 'sorry I don't know that' Alexa/google response - nicely done Jane!
Looking forward to the...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 14
Big congratulations Rhiannon
Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2024
Big congratulations Rhiannon - I loved this and am very glad it has been given some golden cherries which it well deserves- there's something timeless and comforting about both the poem and the lamplight
Read full commentPosted in Night Help
It's the same where I live
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
It's the same where I live Maxine - and the charges are exorbitant too. Car parking should be free in a place like that!
Read full commentPosted in The Tickets, One Too Many!
something missing from this
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
something missing from this sentence marandina
It’s funny how you can peace amongst the torrent of sound that comes with the endless cars, trains and human traffic of Tokyo.
This is nice start - thanks for posting! Looking forward...
Read full commentPosted in Enoshima (Part One of Two)
aha - so that's why Dev
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
aha - so that's why Dev wanted to buy him lunch!
If you're looking for suggestions, I'd say perhaps an edit of the description in the first two thirds of this part. It's good scene setting, but verging on too much
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (3)
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