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I have 232 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 812194 times and 311 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1498 of my 4,716 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1514 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1498 of my comments have received 1514 Great Feedback votes

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"And the moon is distracted.

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

"And the moon is distracted..by questions of astronomy.." You have done well to give it a Shakespearean feel. It has a different dimension as a result and works well! Paul :)

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Posted in A Blindworm’s Revenge

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"I  heart the details of 40

Posted on Tue, 26 Apr 2022

"I  heart the details of 40 prisoners. Five were sent to their deaths.  Six were found not guilty including one who was insane. Three were sent to a house of correction for a year , and one to Newgate for six months. One was sent to be whipped. ...

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Posted in The Straw Hat 2

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It sounds like your daughter

Posted on Sat, 23 Apr 2022

It sounds like your daughter is a rock of support. Keep well and keep writing, Jean. Paul

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Posted in Janus Look 8

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Another beautiful meditation,

Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022

Another beautiful meditation, Jenny.

"....soaring high eagle settles...on the breeze..." Just lovely. Paul :)

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Posted in Fly Like An Eagle

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Plutinpot still very much in

Posted on Fri, 22 Apr 2022

Plutinpot still very much in our thoughts. Interesting that, only the other day, I was talking to someone about Henry VIII and commenting about all the bad things he did and yet he''s considered to be a great king. It's good to see more output...

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Posted in Vladimir Plutinpot Transforms Into A Tyrantosaurus Rex 500 Years After Henry VIII Did The Same! by Alfred N.Muggins (Thus Proving Once Again That History Repeats Itself!)

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There's almost a breathless

Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022

There's almost a breathless feel to the pace you write with, CM. I imagine your characters are based on people in real life? Your style is unique and distinctive to you. You could definitely work this is into something bigger. Enjoyed, as always...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 8

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Wow - "little Switzerland".

Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022

Wow - "little Switzerland". That statement itself conjurs images of rolling hills and vales. Visual and joyous. Paul :)

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Posted in Climbing up from Minton

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Nicely done, Jean. I could

Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022

Nicely done, Jean. I could feel the drama unfold as I read. Paul :)

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Posted in The Straw Hat

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I think the first few lines

Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022

I think the first few lines set the scene perfectly on this visual, serene meditation. I was right there with you, Jenny. Paul :)

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Posted in Imagine Focusing

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Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022

To be fair, you do have look out for those closet Tories! Still enjoying..

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