Take a Bow

i know this is for books but i think a play will be fine lol.

it's set in the present. just tell me what you think but don't be mean. i'm not really liking it anymore but i do like the songs, it took me ages so i'm not gonna give up on it. so here it is Take a Bow...

i will add the songs there just not finished atm. please comment on what you think, nothing mean though x