Spoil me

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Spoil me

http://www.abctales.com/story/barely-black-francis/spoil-me
Yes, I like this -- the miminalism, and all those double entenre. the seemingly simple rhythm and meter so fitting to the content.

It must be a Freudain slip BBF-- mine or yours? I can still change down thrill you you my point exactly It goes to show the amorphous power of poetry.

 

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