A really good vampire story

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ooh yeah, liked that a lot. thought this line could have been phrased better: "It was then I knew Marc and his family kept such a deep dark terrible secret that by its very nature it held them together as much as it tore them apart. " ...and thought the change back to the present day was a bit abrupt, but otherwise really enjoyed it.

Liked this.

Thanks for the compliment Tony & for flagging this piece. It was fun to write, my first & probably last vampire story. To Dan & Pop Bach, glad you enjoyed this story & thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

Thanks Rita! Isomnia is an old friend, we are well acquainted on this side of the world!