MSU - The Proposal

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Fri, 2006-01-20 09:59

lisa h

MSU - The Proposal

http://www.abctales.com/story/my-silent-undoing/the-proposal

I really liked this, the bewilderment of poor Carl and the supernatural feel to his visitor.

Now waiting for part two...

Fri, 2006-01-20 13:20

my silent undoing

Thank you, Lisa - it was very long, and I'm grateful that you read it. Part 2, I don't know when I'll get it written. Might take a day or so! But I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Many thanks, Will.

Fri, 2006-01-20 14:58

Foster

This was well written, giving new life to an old theme - the originality is in the style, which is very engaging.

Fri, 2006-01-20 15:10

span

Bring on part two.... I want to know..... Span

Fri, 2006-01-20 16:35

my silent undoing

Sorry about this, but I've had to take the story down. I'm tying myself in knots trying to finish it, and I can't even stand to look at it right now, so I'll re-post it if and when I finish it. Sorry for raising your expectations, lol. I'm really bad at finishing stories... I just seem to get so bogged down. I suppose the solution to that is to plan the structure beforehand, but that process always "kills" the story for me. Anyway, thank you to everyone who read it.

Fri, 2006-01-20 16:44

lisa h

I have some ideas if you're interested, PM if you are. It would be a shame not to finish it. Lisa

Fri, 2006-01-20 18:05

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my silent undoing

I would love your input. However, I do not know how to send a private message, so... my email address is the_fifth_horse@yahoo.com.

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