njw - The Party

http://www.abctales.com/story/njw/the-party

I was intrigued by a line in this story, which seems very simple:

"I think I might be magic, she said.

This is a well-written little piece, with interesting goings-on. The only thing that troubled me a little is the end, which doesn't seem much connected with the body of the story or the have the same strength of image as the central paragraphs. How is it all connected, I'm left wondering? Is she really magic? What was that all about? I felt that the central part of the story is almost a separate piece to the beginning and end.

Still, a connecting or associative paragraph or two either at the end or the beginning and it would be a very interesting story, indeed.