Everybody Wants To Swim in the River by mcmanaman

http://www.abctales.com/story/mcmanaman/everbody-wants-to-swim-in-the-river

I do like this one. The ending is very tranquil and soothing. Couple of crits, though. Other than the lickle typo in the title on the page, the second line seems a little clumsily constructed - kind of hard to know what is being wiped off.