Need Children's Feedback.

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Need Children's Feedback.

I would be very grateful if any parents of young-ish children could assist with feedback on a story..

I have just posted the start of a series of children's stories - The Luffins.  

They are eventually, (hopefully) going to be illustrated.

But for now, I need the opinion of the target audience.  Roughly: 8 - 11 years old. (ish.)

All of my young relatives are either too old or too young.  

So if there are any children (and parents) out there with 5-10 minutes to spare, I would be extremely grateful for some feedback.    

Many thanks,    mayman.


My eldest is 10 years old so I'll read it to him this weekend mayman.  I'll let you know what he thinks.