Cavern of the Dolaker - comments please!

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Mon, 2002-02-25 17:25

Cavern of the Dolaker
http://www.abctales.com/abcplex/viewStory.cgi?s=17369

I am new and have recently uploaded a short story to the site.

Although I know that there are loads of people out there desperate to get their work noticed and commented on, I would be very greatful for any feedback people could give me.

Thanks,

Jamie.