xmastree - Why is There Good and Bad?

http://www.abctales.com/story/xmastree/why-is-there-good-and-bad

Sorry, I bet the link won't work.

I assume this is an essay of sorts (see other works on quantum physics or whatever...), more like an Op/Ed.

The first few sentences don't seem linked to the rest of the body of work; it starts out as a kind of psychological labelling, then goes into a more sociological slant. I'd suggest making the intro paragraph more 'meaty', and seguing it more into the rest of the work.

And btw, I profoundly disagree that human beings can be labelled so casually as 'good' and 'bad', simply because they do something you/I/we don't like! People are shaped by all kinds of factors, from infancy (hell, even in utero) through adulthood. Deviant behaviour isn't just 'born'; it comes from somewhere, often many somewheres. We'd be better off addressing the root causes of deviant behaviour before they happen, than complaining about it afterward.

IMHO.