A Deserted Englishman by docpov

http://www.abctales.com/story/docpov/a-deserted-englishman

um clever title with this sandy tail. Or could it be a a story of exchanging one life planner for another?

There were parts here i really enjoyed but in some places the description (for me personally) is overmilked - squeezed too hard. A quick run thro to take out the parts where you say the same thing twice or more would be good..

You must understand i only talk for myself (there is no one else like me!) lol. and you dont have to do what i tell you at all, i have no plans on becoming a life planner for anyone, i have enough problem with mine own!