Terms of Endearment by Silver Spun Sand

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Terms of Endearment by Silver Spun Sand

http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/terms-of-endearment

I was carried along by the sheer joy of the "fist love" outbreak and delighted that someone has the courage to say so at 65 (or was it 64?) In a few lines Silver Spun has woven a delightful picture: the "swansdown hair" is a lovely description. And tell the children the words of John Donne: "I am two fools. I know. For loving and for saying so in whining poetry"

Your comment, Yutka was way more beautiful than my poem. Thank you for what you said. Silver Spun

 

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