A Heated Argument by kajm
Sat, 2004-12-11 15:17
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A Heated Argument by kajm
"It's the pockets of easy quiet that we shared, the things you didn't say, the way you didn't say them. The sound of a door opening, somewhere else in the house, or finding your reading glasses next to a book, upturned, spine cracked, pages splayed outwards marking your place"
I think this one's even better than "Glass Walls" - observation of small details make a nothing-much-happens story into a memorable piece of writing. Anyone agree?