Short Story Feedback for Contest: Standard Procedure

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Short Story Feedback for Contest: Standard Procedure

Recently, I have been trying to write a short story compilation for and entry to a short story contest I found on this site. The main premise is about a doctor who finds the correlation between love and insanity. But his subject begins to evolve rapidly and more in control than his creator; which leads to horrific results. Since I am testing new waters after my poetry charade has decreased in readers steadily; I now dedicate myself to this project. If possible please reveiw and comment and post a recent piece of your work for a critique in return. Thank you!
-Chinobus-

Don't worry about a decrease in readers (although, it can be annoying) it all seems quite random on here. Your idea sounds like a promissing one. Stick with it.