I'm new . . . please help me!

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I'm new . . . please help me!

I know this might sound like a shameless bit of self promotion but I really am lookin for a bit of feedback on my work. My story 'Monkey's Christmas' has been read by people but hasn't been rated at all. I had to change the name slightly when i re-submitted it and I lost my damned cherry too! How do I get this back? It's just I realise that even less people will read it without a cherry. Please tell me what you think, althoughy the rest of my stuff isn't up to the same standard (I believe, but you can check it out if you disagree). Please . . . I crave the attention of my peers!

Emily Dubberley
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Dear Ginger, You just mail the editor who gave you the cherry and ask them to give it back. I'll go and put it back now though. Cheers Emily
gingermark
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Thanks for that. Couldn't find the e-mail as it's been downloaded onto the browser of my other computer by my trusty technician who is, unfortunately, over 150 miles away presently.
andrew pack
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Gingermark - were you spicing the language up a bit ? I thought this piece was great - it had me in fits of laughter.
gingermark
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redknight, didn't you know that i spend so much time in your house? i observed your husband while attaching myself to the wall, after stealing your jam. i am a fly. i am the fly. i am everywhere
redknight
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This could have been a nice little story if only you hadn't used my husband as a model for the monkey. He curses too much too. How did you get my husband to a tee? I couldnot help smiling at this very long tale of cures,and agitation. Keep up the writing!
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