'Banishing Major D' - my first submission.

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'Banishing Major D' - my first submission.

Hi Everyone,

I'm a newcomer to ABC Tales and have recently made my first submission, 'Banishing Major D', inspired by a personal battle with clinical depression. I'd be really grateful if some kind hearted soul[s] could take a peek at this tale, and give me some constructive feedback. Purple hugs n' kisses to you all!

skydolphin
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Hi and welcome! ============ skydolphin
purplecat
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Thank you, skydolphin! I'm normally very wary of discussion forums, but this one seems very civilised. How are you today?
Andrea
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Hi Purple, welcome to ABC.
purplecat
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Thank you too, Andrea!
Andrea
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I read your story, too and liked it very much. Might be a trifle long for some people though... Beautifully written though and very moving.
skydolphin
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I'm fine thanks! The weather is extremely cold and windy so I spent my weekend at home. I've read your story and I liked it very much. You are very imaginative! Waiting for your next piece of work! take care ========================= skydolphin
Tom Saunders
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Hello, Purple. Welcome.
purplecat
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Thank you all for your kind words and encouragement! They are greatly appreciated.
Karl Wiggins
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Welcome Purple. I've printed this off and intend to read it tonight. There's a piece of my own that I'd like you to read. I'd be interested in your opinion. It would be blatant self-promotion to mention it here, but tomorrow I'll e-mail you with the details. Some of these guys will know what I'm talking about.
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