new story - comments appreciated

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i'm just working on a new story at the moment - its at a rough final draft stage. (if that makes sense, lol.) i would be grateful for any feedback as its quite different to some of the other things i've been writing lately. thanks. :)

I'm not sure, Belle. Maybe because it's so different from your usual writing. Still, even though I'm older, I can still remember feeling something similar, so it could work well. I remember the fad of holding your breath until you nearly passed out. Give it a try, that's what writing is all about. Lisax

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