She's from the future part one by Sincerelyme

http://www.abctales.com/story/sincerelyme/shes-from-the-future-pt-i

this intriuged me and looks like it could be an interesting story.

You achieve a lot in this chapter and i do think you rush it a little - more description of the rooms in the house etc would slow the pace and create a more vivid picture.

But a great start, i look forward to more.

Juliet