What are your opinion regarding the poem "Spaniards eye"

Hi, I would love to comment, but what makes it super easy is a linkey. To the particular piece you are refering too. here http://www.abctales.com/story/burk28/spaniards-eye Right, over all I like the use of single words and 'short'ness to add a sense of action. I am not so keen on the use of the same sentence first and last. Maybe some clever twisting of the words to imply a change rather than it being the same as the start. Sometimes I stubled when I read it which made it hard to develope a full picture in my mind. I did, over all, like it. I think this is candidate for becoming a short story. There is an image in there I would like to read more about.