Smallvilles

I would appreciate people's opinions of the whole concept of this collection of poems. If you have time you could say which poems really fail to work.

I am fully aware it is an outrageous cheek to attempt this as someone who has only visited 6 out 50 states... so not too many comments in this vein.

http://www.abctales.com/set/ewan/smallvilles

regards Ewan