Shaving Monkeys by Alan Green

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Sun, 2007-11-18 12:19

tcook

Shaving Monkeys by Alan Green

Oo-er I think we may have found a gem of a new writer here. This is just a brilliant short story:

http://www.abctales.com/story/alan-green/shaving-monkeys

Sun, 2007-11-18 13:21

Juliet OC

i didn't rate shaving monkeys as much as 'it was all a dream', which imo is much more polished. The rep of 'shaving' and 'monkey' began to annoy, at least 8 refs to shaving in first para, but with a good edit it would be a cracker. i do agree though that the writing is fresh and the ideas leap of the page. Juliet

Juliet

Sun, 2007-11-18 14:33

raysawriter

Enjoyed this zany story a lot. Ranks with the Ministry of silly walks for helping humankind. Liked the Pooterish narrative. Ray

Ray

Sun, 2007-11-18 17:27

Kropotkin38

It's a good 'un. I'm off to read the other two.

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