my story

now why should anyone write a story about such an ordinary girl... but you've managed to make it very interesting... you made this ordinary girl a nice little nutter/serial killer... and what's important, you didn't tell us her ordinary name. Cool!

THANK YOU

ssssssssh megan we're all reading your story.

K what did u think of it

SSSSSSSHHHHHHHH!!!!!

nnnoooooooooooooo WHAT DID YOU THINK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm still thinking about this ordinary girl's name. Flash do you think you can find something?

Well if you let me finish i'll tell you.

THE BEGINING SAYS "SHE HAS NO NAME"

Megan she has a name. Or had a name.

had she s a ghoust she was killed in the fun fair by a knife in the hear and she is seaking revenge

so she had a name once upon a time, aha! we have to find her real name then, and after that find the name of the person that killed her, so that we can stop her from killing innocent people.

no cos she dosnt know who killed so shell allways do it !!

Megan, I won't let her kill innocent people! Will you?

Well Megan it was an interesting idea, but i suggest you use your spell check facilty to go and edit it a wee bit, this will tidy up the appearance and make it easier to understand. then i think you should spend a while looking at some of the other writers work on the site, and try and take in how they compile their stories and poems, youll find it a rewarding experience both in terms of enjoyment and as a learning experience. Good luck with your writing megan, hope you enjoy it.

thank you flash and clock shup up!!!

shut i mean !!!

you mean? I had no idea! me good!

any body who reads this must go on bob !

Bob, says go away...you are doing his/her head in. Flash you are so kind! Tai, can\t cope anymore this these totally estranged beings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ghost trying to talk to me but I think he want to be my friend like wen I am sad he come's out try to talk to me but I run away becuas I am scaerd p.s. shoud I talk to him

yes u should, randy [%sig%]

people read it go on