Snorkeller Down by Macserp

http://www.abctales.com/story/macserp/sorkeler-down-high-adventure-in-th...

There was a lot in this I liked. In particular, I felt the couple's relationship came across as very real.

My only problem with it was the ... what do you call it... naration? I found the use of 'You' a tad confusing at times and I was a little unsure towards the end, as to what he had and hadn't really seen. Good story, though. Been snorkelling over coral - brought it all back.