Superbowl XL by R Tavs

i agree a very enjoyable read. I think you could have done more with the dad reference to give it another level. An unintended bi-product of her football conversion, leading to a closer relationship. Juliet

Yep - no real crit, just wanna say I enjoyed it. Kept it simple and, as Lou said, yuck-free. That jagger/satisfaction line made me smile, too much of that would have been too corny and "clever", but that one bit was just fine and dandy. Well flagged by the way, it's not what I usually read and I would have missed it.

well, i just want to say thanks! i discovered abctales from another member just recently. i've never posted any of my work before, but really enjoy the community here! i really look forward to reading all of your work as well :o) xo