Anima and animus short story

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Anima and animus short story

I'd like to know what people make of this wierd tale. It seems an over-simplified attempt to personify the archetypes of anima and animus to me but is very visual and memorable. What do you all think?

andrew pack
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I thought there were bits that were overwritten, but then occasional lovely flourishes like ' I looked over at my lovely wife, who was sitting in a rowing machine' and 'the old ice excuse just won't wash'. Reminded me of Danielwski's "House of Leaves"
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