Mr atlee by Daivid Allen.

http://www.abctales.com/user/david-allen

I thought at first there may have been some twist but it turned out to be a quite enjoyable piece of descriptive writing, some great details and phrases, but it really is let down by poor grammar, so it doesn't read as well as it should.
I was often hoping vainly for a full -stop, only to find one appear in completely the wrong place (such as just before the description of the crutch - it cut the description off from its subject).
You asked for some honest critique, David, and i guess this is it - sort out your grammar, don't rush it, edit carefully and you will do yourself, and your work a great favour.
Keep writing, keep posting, and welcome to the site.