My Novel
Tue, 2015-09-01 17:17
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My Novel
So I'm new to writing and honestly I was never good at writing, but I decided to write a novel and need some serious feedback on this story. Can anyone please check it out and give me some advice or constructive criticism?
Heres chapter one:
http://www.abctales.com/story/dbunz/chapter-1-better-dead-john