The Visionary

http://www.abctales.com/node/549656

this story really hooked me from the beginning - the dialogue is a particular strength.

I like the idea of science questionning spiritualism and i am really glad that it didn't go down the 'scientist don't believe then end up in a car crash that was foretold' route as that has been done to death.

So the ending was refreshing, but i hate to say it a little lame. Maybe its just needs to be a bit more witty, like a lot of the rest of the piece.

There were a few places where the flow seem to stumble a little but a thorough edit when you have got some space from it will do it.

But it was an enjoyable read that sustained my interest all the way.

ty, Juliet