a sad figure is cut
Wed, 2007-08-15 01:08
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a sad figure is cut
ok this poem is the first poem of mine that has been cherry picked. I'm anxious to know what other people think of it. so please read it. and tell me what you think. thanks.
I cherried it for the 'unjewish man with a jewish name' bit in particular. It says a lot with few words. But I also liked the sense of isolation between the two people and the way in which it was expressed.