Just very very funny...

http://www.abctales.com/story/kevinjheritage/h3lp-th3r3s-a-frog-in-my-co...

thankyou peposid for s3tting the chall3ng3.

I started reading this piece, yesterday night just before I left work, not having acess to the internet at home, I decided to print it and read it on the tube. So engrossed was I, that when I reached the last page I was a bit confused. Self critical person that I am, I then started calling myself an idiot for not having printed the entire thing....only to get to work today and find out, that WAS the entire thing!

It's excellent and brave. I think that I'm honest with my writting but nothing prepared me for your piece and its reality and honesty.

http://www.abctales.com/story/ab27/in-the-morning-in-the-morning

I found this story/poem very refreshing; it's a different style to what is common. You have used some wonderful sentences; I just wanted to keep reading it. Sometimes with structures like this you have one or two strong paragraphs, and weaker ones, but you have managed to create a whole load of good ones.

It's a great read!

A courageous and powerful poem, Soraia! Who will not identify, if one is honest?
But I am thinking of the words Saul Bellow wrote:
A man may say: "From now on I'm going to speak the truth" But the truth hears him and runs away and hides before he's even done speaking.

I absolutely love this.
http://www.abctales.com/story/paul_a/fridge-magnet-0

There are so many things I like about it, the mundane, the realiity of it. I'm able to imagine the setting and your feelings exactly. I love this:

"I hate you for thinking glass of milk
when just before now I had you
flat on your back
with your nipples,
like two frozen peas,
placed so expertly
on top of everything, everything, everything else.
Close, please, that refrigerator door."

For those of you who were expecting a revenge-based challenge, I decided it was far too serious and thought I'd go with the following instead...

The usual drill - title is...

Help! There's a Frog in My Computer!

Off you pop!

*** pepsoid ***