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Nice start! Looking forward
Posted on Thu, 01 Apr 2021
Nice start! Looking forward to reading more of this
Congratulations on the pick Luigi - but I note a little bit of poetic licence in this piece - you are definitely not computer illiterate, and we'd all be the poorer if you hadn't mastered the art of zoom!
The horror of the stuffed flies and the dioramas! This is beautifully described - the madness of it all. Is it a part of something longer? It feels as if the ending is from a different story
Nice start! Looking forward
Posted on Thu, 01 Apr 2021
Nice start! Looking forward to reading more of this
Read full commentPosted in Marta and the Bug (1-2)
Congratulations on the pick
Posted on Thu, 25 Mar 2021
Congratulations on the pick Luigi - but I note a little bit of poetic licence in this piece - you are definitely not computer illiterate, and we'd all be the poorer if you hadn't mastered the art of zoom!
Read full commentPosted in A Lack of Application(s)
Brilliant! (and now I want
Posted on Tue, 23 Mar 2021
Brilliant! (and now I want some cake)
Read full commentPosted in I am a Fruit Cake
Lovely to see another part of
Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021
Lovely to see another part of this - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 2
Big congratulations to you
Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021
Big congratulations to you both Luigi! Perhaps you can plan a party for the summer?
Read full commentPosted in A Milestone
This is our Poem of the Week
Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021
This is our Poem of the Week - Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in Vernal Equinox
really enjoyed this Penny. Is
Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021
really enjoyed this Penny. Is there more to come?
one suggestion here:
Willow swiftly rolled back on her paws and kept its eyes on the strange bird.
kept her eyes?
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail"
I watched that door of
Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021
I watched that door of seasonal hope open
to a land of warmer winds and gentle breezes.
this has been the longest winter ever - I can't wait for that door to open. Thank you for reminding us of its existence Paul - and...
Read full commentPosted in Vernal Equinox
some fabulous imagery in this
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
some fabulous imagery in this piece Jenny
Read full commentPosted in Escape To Freedom
The horror of the stuffed
Posted on Thu, 11 Mar 2021
The horror of the stuffed flies and the dioramas! This is beautifully described - the madness of it all. Is it a part of something longer? It feels as if the ending is from a different story
Read full commentPosted in In Days Like This to Be an Honest Person
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