Luke Neima

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I have 7 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 24147 times and 7 of my stories have been cherry picked.
26 of my 292 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 30 votes

Luke Neima

26 of my comments have received 30 Great Feedback votes

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Yes - very well drawn

Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2014

Yes - very well drawn characters. Loved the dialogue in the second section, too. This is really well put together - short but I already feel so drawn into the narrator's world. Looking forward to the next bit.

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Posted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 1 of 3

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Short and powerful. I like

Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2014

Short and powerful. I like how all the emotion of the scene is carried off by that one image of a pebble in a shoe. Very well wrought!

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Posted in Slippery Souls

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What a caricature! I loved

Posted on Mon, 30 Dec 2013

What a caricature! I loved the first image of him chewing stubbornly in his chair, refusing to look at his family 'He proceeded to chomp with all the finesse of a washing machine on spin cycle with a load of spanners in its drum.' Very Dickensian...

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Posted in The Kookaburra New Year Resolution.

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