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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015
Hi Rhiannon,
you've summed up December perfectly. I think to have the seasons written in such beautiful poetry, you can look back and remember the year and keep it as a record.
I like the descriptions in this piece, the warmth of the cafe, the dark rain, the umbrella holding up its arms in dispair as the wind blows. I could picture the scene, as you brought it to life.
Those feelings of emotional torcher, that menacing danger. One day you would grow up to be a man, a mouse no more, but still suffering the scars of those memories.
I could feel your distress within each word. I hope you find the strength...
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015
Hi Rhiannon,
you've summed up December perfectly. I think to have the seasons written in such beautiful poetry, you can look back and remember the year and keep it as a record.
I do so enjoy your natural nature poems.
Jenny...
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I like the descriptions in
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
I like the descriptions in this piece, the warmth of the cafe, the dark rain, the umbrella holding up its arms in dispair as the wind blows. I could picture the scene, as you brought it to life.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in An evening in Amsterdam
A beautifully mastered look
Posted on Sun, 22 Nov 2015
A beautifully mastered look at the how children perceive colour, almost like a rainbow.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in 'Shadows To The Child'
Posted on Sat, 21 Nov 2015
memories come out of hiding when we look for them, but often they are never what they seem, just a fading glimpse of what we want them to be.
A haunting poem indeed Tina.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in For Sale - Sold as Seen
Sounds like the person in
Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015
Sounds like the person in your story lives a very opulent lifestyle. Left me intrigued.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The sitting woman
The similarity of the longing
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015
The similarity of the longing for love and the willing expression given to the little bird, comes across perfectly in this poem Tina.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Supplication
This is a stunning piece of
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
This is a stunning piece of writing Rhiannon, it has all the portrayals of the season.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in November
Very funny, put a smile on my
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
Very funny, put a smile on my face.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Audacious Auditions
There's a haunting quality to
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
There's a haunting quality to this poem that I really enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Home
Those feelings of emotional
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
Those feelings of emotional torcher, that menacing danger. One day you would grow up to be a man, a mouse no more, but still suffering the scars of those memories.
I could feel your distress within each word. I hope you find the strength...
Read full commentPosted in One Day The Mouse Will Roar
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