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Oh Tina, I flet so much
Posted on Sat, 21 Mar 2015
Oh Tina, I felt so much saddness at reading this piece. Those poor creatures that you got so much pleasure from, now gone.
A loving, tender poem that brings to mind the savageness of nature, that is inevitable.
It's frustrating to think that life is there just waiting to be discovered, and yet I wonder what it would be like to a stumble by chance on something we don't understand.
I enjoyed this poem and understand that poetry is a tangle of words that entwine, becoming jumbled to eventually having meaning. Hope I read this as you intended it percieved.
Loved how you shifted from nature to music and then on to...
Oh Tina, I flet so much
Posted on Sat, 21 Mar 2015
Oh Tina, I felt so much saddness at reading this piece. Those poor creatures that you got so much pleasure from, now gone.
A loving, tender poem that brings to mind the savageness of nature, that is inevitable.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in 'White as Diamonds'
Hi Tina,
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2015
Hi Tina,
poor Brody, just the thought of Cam would make my blood boil. Like how the last bit makes you think that maybe Cam was growing on Brody.
A great story told in such a way, it kept me glued to the page.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in One Night Only (Part 2)
A real Armageddon scene
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2015
A real Armageddon scene described brilliantly here in this desolate poem of despair.
Very good read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Riding the Static, Part III: Skeletal
It's frustrating to think
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2015
It's frustrating to think that life is there just waiting to be discovered, and yet I wonder what it would be like to a stumble by chance on something we don't understand.
I like the mystery behind your writing.
Jenny.
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Read full commentPosted in Riding the Static, Part II: The Signal
Hi Tina,
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015
Hi Tina,
I certainly remember this poem, it meant a lot the first time I read, now it means even more.
It's a poem that evokes the mystery, passion and magic, that is part of our history and should never be forgotten like your...
Read full commentPosted in Camelot
I enjoyed this poem and
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2015
I enjoyed this poem and understand that poetry is a tangle of words that entwine, becoming jumbled to eventually having meaning. Hope I read this as you intended it percieved.
Loved how you shifted from nature to music and then on to...
Read full commentPosted in The Vicious Circle of Brittle Leaves
This is such a clever poem
Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2015
This is such a clever poem Tina, it put a smile
on my face.
I read about...
Read full commentPosted in Ticket to Fly...
It must have been an amazing
Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2015
Hi Jean,
It must have been an amazing sight to see a train running for the first time, some of those engines were huge monsters.
I cannot imagine how hard in must have been to farm 240 acres of land...phew! It tires me out just...
Read full commentPosted in Susannah Woychik's Letters -5 1874-6
loved the lines...
Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2015
Hi Tina,
loved the lines...
the whine of a jet, threading its way
through the slow, cool jazz of a Sunday morning
waking...no particular place to go...
the dawning of my world,
soft, and yawning, beside...
Read full commentPosted in These I Have Loved
I so enjoyed reading your
Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2015
I so enjoyed reading your story Philip, could imagine this as a book with pictures.
Glad I found it.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Everything was Blue and Green
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