Clips of a story im working on :)

Hey so I've been working on a story for a while now, but my thing is i can't just sit and write. So I write bits and pieces at a time, as i get inspired :)
so please just tell me what you think!
:)

Untitled- random part for story.

a story i've been working on for a while. this clip is about a girl who gets in trouble and has no one to call, so she calls her ex.