Victor's Spoils

This is my first novel project that I have worked on, as my only other published work was a collection of short stories I wrote. I am currently in the process of writing the book, and am planning on posting the chapters as I finish them. Some I will edit and improve as I move forward, and others I will pay more attention to after I have finished the book. I am looking to get constructive criticism and reviews of any nature on the story. I hope that you all enjoy the novel, and I hope you will follow along with Victor's Spoils. ^__^

Chapter 1: A Deal with the Devil - Part 1

The trees tore past Joanna Nixon so fast that their blurred branches made her stomach churn, only adding to the anxiety that ripped at her chest...
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Chapter 1: A Deal with the Devil - Part 2

She saw him creeping closer to the home, and pushing the door open to enter. He saw everything happening, and he ducked back out of the house,...
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Chapter 2: The Price of a Head - Part 1

The taste of ash and death coated his mouth as if he had just rinsed it out with an old, dirty sock. The brown trench coat that hung around his...
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Chapter 2: The Price of a Head - Part 2

Ellis strolled through the filth that made up the western side of the city, the alleys seeming to grow narrower with each corner he rounded. However...

Chapter 3: A Chance Encounter - Part 1

The east side of Bristol was dull enough as it was, with all the posh young men and women strolling about town with their shit-eating grins and their...

Chapter 3: A Chance Encounter - Part 2

The exchange was very brief, and there was little in the way of actual speech. Ellis mentioned that it was a beautiful day, and that he needed to...

Chapter 3: A Chance Encounter - Part 3

He began his descent into the darkness below, his candle flickering more violently as he moved down the shoddily thrown together stairs. He was...

Chapter 4: A War Waged - Part 1

Digging up the casket proved to be easier than anticipated. The dirt she hauled from the farmlands seemed completely weightless, and for every...

Chapter 4: A War Waged - Part 2

Kadence felt something warm and wet on his lips; the taste of metal filled his mouth. When he realized what it was, he pulled his head away, trying...