Opinions, suggestions Requested Please!

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Fri, 2002-04-26 05:53

I have posted the Intro and first two chapters of my book on depression. This is the first attempt I have made at long non-fiction, and would appreciate any feedback anyone has. I'm so much more comfortable with fiction, but felt compelled to write this on. Stace is my username, and the entries are under Gifts from the Darkness.

Thank you all who will take the time to read and comment!

Stace

Wed, 2002-05-01 22:37

holly

hi stace, i had a good read of your first few entries on depression ahd found it very interesting and well written. Not being a particularly good authority on th esubject of depression i dont have a clue if what you said or were trying to get across was correct, but i do know i enjoyed reading it and found it authentic and intriging(dunno how you spell it) good luck with it, we'll probably be seeing your name in lights soon. lol take care hol x ps if you care to pass your judgement on any of my work my username is young_hol. thanks xx

Fri, 2002-05-03 13:19

hameline

Stace -- I wish I could reciprocate your kindness in critiquing my story but at the moment I am not really prepared to read about depression. I did my undergraduate degree in psychology so it is an interesting topic and I will try to read it soon. I've read a couple of your Thyme stories though. Is there one that you particularly want commented? Thanks Gini

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