Oscar by jingle

the ending is a corker! But i do feel the build up to the action is a little long, i would be inclined to prune something the beginning about Oscar at the pet shop and get to the action sooner. Just my thoughts Juliet

Thank you both for the comments. I can't help wondering how many visitors your Grandmother had? A bit long? Well, I tried to write a "Shaggy Dog Story" but perhaps I should have shaved the shaggy bit a little. Still, long as you liked it! Thanks.