normal people: maisie

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normal people: maisie

http://www.abctales.com/story/maisie/normal-people

i enjoyed reading this ... the tone was consistant and drew me right through to the end ... i like that deluded voice ... oblivious to the obvious which we as readers feel all clever for identifying ...

i agree, and don't we all feel like we know someone just like them, and yet we ourselves ......... NTA- Abigail by Purple Haze has a similar feel to this in that it is also about what we consider normal, desirable. Juliet

Juliet

I've given it its deserved cherry but please, Maisie, go and correct the spelling. I know it's pedantic but a good story like this one deserves good spelling!
Maisie, you did a really good job on the tone, making her sound completly sane whilst at the same time showing just what a pain she was! You don't happen to have a crummy neighbor, do you?
thanks for all comments & emails, i'm sorry bout the spelling tcook, so have gone back over it and left one :) It was written late that night on notepad (no spelling help) and then put straight on here without another thought, hope that explains the errors. etc. I told one of my pals i got a cherries for it, and they said, is that because its the pits? lol...

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

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