The hottest new poet this side of the universe!

OK, so that sounds a little self-centered and egotistical! Feel free to scream at me, but this does have a point. Will someone please comment on my work, which at the moment consists of Crush, Loneliness and Mermaid. My username is truthful. Comment on my work and I promise I'll comment on yours! Hey, I am truthful! Constructive criticism only please! P.S. Does anyone else love Carol Ann Duffy's work?